Szybki rzut okiem.

[Rocket Man OP]

Tak, wiem ze jest specjalny temat, jednak jego popularnosc jest prawie ze zerowa, a na jutro musze to oddac. Tak wiec jesli ktos byloby tak mily, to prosze o wytkniecie razacych bledow w ponizszym tekscie.
Jest to opis jakiegos wybranego miejsca 200-250 slowek, na mature.

These days people often forget about the places they were born in. They admire the beauty of common, historical places instead of these where they were actually brought up in.
I have chosen to describe my homeland for this reason.
XXX is a small town located in north-west Poland. There live about 5 thousand people.
It is surrounded by several lakes, 7 actually. These makes this place special. It gives a great opportunity to get some rest. Just imagine, all the vegetation around you, tweeting birds, squeaking grasshoppers, cold relaxing water, open spaces to play some games or just to walk around. It is the perfect place to spend your holiday in.
Besides lakes, there are some forests where you can associate with nature. Lovers will surely appreciate quiet roads filled with mistletoe.
But XXX is not only beautiful landscape. It has a significant historical value. What is worth to remember is that In nineteen century there was a amber road.
The town remembers of course the echo of World War II, in which it was under the german occupation. I must not let people forget about the suffer that our grandparents felt.
I hope I convinced you that XXX is a special and unique place, because for me, it is.
In my opinion it is as worth to visit as every worldwide popular place. It contains its own mysteries, that you can discover by yourselves, I will not spoil the fun.


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To moze jeszcze jedno dorzuce, tez na jutro.

“Sword of the Truth” is a fantasy novel written by Terry Goodkind. It is very valuable for everyone who is fan of this kind of literature.
The books follow the protagonists Richard Rahl, Kahlan Amnell and Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on their quest to defeat oppressors who seek to control the world and those who wish to unleash evil upon the world of the living.
It is one of my favorite books. The reason is that Goodking excellently presented the thoughts of the characters which in my opinion is the most important thing to do when you write a book. It helps your readers to assimilate with the protagonists.
The world presented in “Sword of the Truth” is showed in detail. Everything has a logical explanation and is valid for the story. There are no unused, uncompleted or forgotten threads, everything is consistent. It show the skill of Goodkind, tells you how good writer he actually is.
Books contains colorful descriptions of surrounding the characters world. These stimulate your imagination and helps you get away from reality.
The book is worth to read because of interesting story telling about the bravery, love, curiosity and evil power of lies. It has an shocking ending, but If you want to know it, you will have to read it yourselves.



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Dzieki, poprawilem. Cos jeszcze ? :]

[marek]

zamiast I have chosen my homeland to describe for this reason napisałbym:
i have chosen to describe my homeland for this reason.

nie centuary, a century
of course, a nie ofcourse
zamiast second world war, napisałbym World War II

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praca 2:
It shows the skill of Goodkind, tells you what a (zamiast how) good writer he actually is.
Books contain(a nie contains)
colorful descriptions of the world surrounding the characters
these stimulate your imagination and help(tutaj bez s, bo mówimy o liczbie mnogiej)
the book is worth reading
interesting story about(bez telling)
it has a shocking ending