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Dear John

Thanks for your letter. I hope you're ok. I'm in England for 2 months so I decided to write this letter.

I have found temporary job here. I'm waiter in one of London's restaurant. I came to England because my parents have decided that I have to earn some money on my own.

I'm staying with my uncle's family. I really like them because they are really friendly. My uncle is very interesting person. He visited many countries and he tells nice stories about them. Their son, Peter, is 17 years old. Same as me, he loves riding bikes. Also he is really kind person and we are good friends.

From Monday to Friday I only work at restaurant. But at weekend I usually ride bike with Peter's friends and then their show me intresting places in London.

London is very intresting city. You can meet there people of many different nationalities.

Say 'hi' to your friends!

See you soon

XYZ

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zadanie 10 z lewej strony

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I'm in England for 2 months so I decided to write this letter.

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Moim zdaniem "I've decided" Present perfect bardziej

Edit:Ten angielski ehhh. Tak naprawde jest duzo opcji do wyboru. Anglicy uzywaja tylko kilku czasow, a nam każą się uczyć ponad 10. Na przykład tu:

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I came to England because my parents have decided that I have to earn some money on my own.

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Ja bym napisał "my parents had decided" bo to się działo przed tym jak przyjechałeś (ja mówie na past perfect "czas zaprzeszły") ale present perfect też w sumie pasuje, bo jest skutek w terazniejszosci.

Tyle, że tak to można rozkminiać każde zdanie. Sorry namąciłem ci, ale nie mogę się powstrzymać ;p.

a poza tym wszystko jest w porzadku?

Cysio ,z którego liceum jesteś ?

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He visited many countries and he tells nice stories about them.

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To bym zamienił na has visited

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Their son, Peter, is 17 years old

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To 'Their' mi nie pasuje. Piszesz o wujku a tu nagle to.

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But at weekend I usually ride bike with Peter's friends and then their show me intresting places in London.

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But at THE weekend...

nie at the weekend tylko on the weekend

a niee moj blad, pomylilo mi sie sorry